Friday, June 18, 2010

Regrets and Misconceptions

I once knew a pretty young girl
She loved me more than life
But when I started loving her back
She was someone else’s wife.

I once had a nightmare
A nightmare I always feared
But when that nightmare came true
All my fears disappeared.

I once used to laugh
And scorned those who cried
But nowadays only crying
It seems can get me high

I once had a vision
A passion as strong as fire
But when the vision was realized
I wasn’t there to admire.

I once used to think
I am right and they are wrong
And when I came to my senses
They were long gone.

8 comments:

  1. 1stly nice template...
    and a awesome Post- Xam Post...loved it..

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  2. Ore baba eshei blog likhe felechhis.Kudos to you! *bows*
    And loved the poem.Awesome rhyme,feelings and statements.Could relate to the emotions very well :)

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  3. eta pati khilli hoye gelo .... :D
    very good rhythm ... keep it up...:)

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  4. hmmm.......good rhyming....but you write better than this...though this one is good too...

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  5. @ankit and samadrita

    thanks a lot...


    @eddie

    hmm...

    @QOI-yeah this was written in a hurry and put together...even I felt it's kinda weak...

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  7. nice and pretty and nonchalant. kobita kakhono bhalo-kharap compare kora jaye i na....


    btw, real life inspirations? in that case, well, tough luck, rider, but nevermind, ride on....

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  8. a little real...a little fiction...Marlon Brando had a mumbling diction :D

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