I once knew a pretty young girl
She loved me more than life
But when I started loving her back
She was someone else’s wife.
I once had a nightmare
A nightmare I always feared
But when that nightmare came true
All my fears disappeared.
I once used to laugh
And scorned those who cried
But nowadays only crying
It seems can get me high
I once had a vision
A passion as strong as fire
But when the vision was realized
I wasn’t there to admire.
I once used to think
I am right and they are wrong
And when I came to my senses
They were long gone.
8 comments:
1stly nice template...
and a awesome Post- Xam Post...loved it..
Ore baba eshei blog likhe felechhis.Kudos to you! *bows*
And loved the poem.Awesome rhyme,feelings and statements.Could relate to the emotions very well :)
eta pati khilli hoye gelo .... :D
very good rhythm ... keep it up...:)
hmmm.......good rhyming....but you write better than this...though this one is good too...
@ankit and samadrita
thanks a lot...
@eddie
hmm...
@QOI-yeah this was written in a hurry and put together...even I felt it's kinda weak...
nice and pretty and nonchalant. kobita kakhono bhalo-kharap compare kora jaye i na....
btw, real life inspirations? in that case, well, tough luck, rider, but nevermind, ride on....
a little real...a little fiction...Marlon Brando had a mumbling diction :D
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